DB's Shorts: Am I Losing You?

I love you.

Please look at me.

No, look at me, REALLY look at me.

Stop staring at her. HER.

Of all people, why her?

Hush Hush review and commentary

Here's the commentary(for the whole Chapter One)

I just like uploading drawings, even if they're not nice, okay?

That is all.

I tried it again.

I write like
H. P. Lovecraft

I Write Like by Mémoires, journal software. Analyze your writing!

So, I understand, I write like many different writers.

Interesting, though. For the first one I tried, I used an unfinished draft for 'Sun and Moon'. I tried it again when I finished. I still wrote like Gertrude Stein in that story.

Frankly, I'm proud of this one. I read his stories, and I'm a fan.

Really, really big fan.

DB's Shorts: Sun and Moon

I was there.

This is my new avatar

This is what I'm gonna use on the forum 'very serious'.

What do you think? Is it nice? Or the exact opposite?

And I write like......

I write like
Gertrude Stein

I Write Like by Mémoires, journal software. Analyze your writing!

On the to do list:

1.)Find out who the hell she is.

2.)Pray that she isn't in a mental hospital.

3.)Pray that she doesn't write about eating feces.

Well, self, I wish you luck on that.

Update: here's her wiki page Gertrude Stein

She has some rocking quotes.

For example:

You are a LOST GENERATION.

I've been rich and I've been poor. It's better to be rich.

Hemingway, remarks are not literature.

A rose is a rose is a rose is a rose.

If it can be done, why do it?

Gertrude, not only do we allegedly write alike, we THINK alike.

DB's Shorts: I Swear It

I patiently wait for school to end.

3rd subject, 4th subject,....I wait until the bell rings. Then I get out.